Best Laid Plans
I redrew this 5 times. I still think I could have used another pass at it.
I’m going to try to get more pages up while the world is shut down and we’re all terrified. Not that I have extra time, I don’t (my day job is already pretty solitary, anyway, so I’m still going to work), but I feel like if I can do something that helps get our minds off the global shitshow then I will.
Well, Greg, you did ask for it!
Maybe change the bg color so you don’t need the white border. Perhaps change the perspective so you can see Mars’ hands better. Like going 3rd person above and behind Gregor so the focus is more on Mars the the detailed work of what he’s doing or at an angle (still behind Gregor) slightly to the side. Idk, I’m no artist and we don’t expect you to retcon it unless you really want to. So no pressure 🙂
Stay safe, stay healthy, and avoid any strange vehicles that say “Umbrella Corp” on the side 😛
I just mean that I want it to look more violent 😜
“More violent” made me think of Shizuo from Durarara! specifically, for some reason… Severe anger management problems with super strength. One of the best clips displaying this is when he punches a guy out of his clothes after the gang banger hits him in the head. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HIIcY-dH5qI He is also prone to grabbing anything nearby to use as a weapon such as throwing vending machines.
Ouch. Good thing he doesn’t have a nose to break. =p
Suggestion: Add an archive button so that we can re-read specific sections if we wish. Getting past pages at random is rather frustrating.
Done! look under the social media links!