OUR Turn
So next week I’ll be off continent in Hawaii. I’m going to try to have at least one page ready, but you may be seeing some filler this time next week.
So next week I’ll be off continent in Hawaii. I’m going to try to have at least one page ready, but you may be seeing some filler this time next week.
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well, i think those twit twins aint gonna live much longer.
Gregor isn’t stupid….. It wouldn’t surprise me if he’d pulled his punch in order to lull them into a false sense of security and make them cocky enough to show off any new tricks they might have before he REALLY hits them. With his chin. 😀
I love this strip. I’m glad you stuck with it. Keep it coming.
I think he pulled his punch too, but ore because he was afraid of turning them into jelly. Now that he knows they can take more power, think he might cut loose on the next one.
Hope their med insurance is paid up …
To coin a phrase from a favorite movie, “c’mon, Gregor, let’s put the women and children to bed, and make us some fuckin dinner!”
No holding back big guy … put ’em down for the count!
Woot! my one vote moved you up 6 places! C’mon, guys, go vote!
My thought was, “Grab her leg!” I can imagine a guy like that could hold on hard enough to make things difficult for the two.
First of all, I love the comic. The story is amusing enough, I love the characters – especially Gregor himself – and I keep checking the site each week to catch the new updates. The one-liners are epic, and all in all I just really like the whole idea behind the comic. 🙂
However, that being said, I have to say that this strip here isn’t one of your best. I like your drawing style, but this -particular- strip just looks, well… sub par.
I try to keep my critique fair and to the point, and here’s the rub: Gregor looks great taking a faceful of Twack, but the Tumbler Twins look like garbage.
I can’t get over the fact that the first and last panels look unnatural. Their physique just looks gimpy and stunted in the first panel: The feet are way too bulky, and that kind of bothers me. It just doesn’t look good.
The last panel just seems all wrong mostly due to his awkward stance. The whole panel is about an acrobatic stunt but it looks like he’s just about to hurl her like a hammer. (She looks great in this panel though!) What I’m getting at is that it doesn’t look like they’ve been spinning – It looks like he’s dodging something, or surfing on an invisible surfboard. I feel it takes something away from the Twack to see him in such a pose. He looks ridiculous. If I was twirling someone around in a wide arc like that I’d sure as hell plant both my feet firmly on the ground and hold my partner with both hands.
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OK, That sounded a little harsh… But I hope you see my critique in the right light. I’m not saying it to be mean, I’m just sharing my honest opinion in the hopes that you will find it helpful. I know I’m complaining about small things, but I still feel they dilute the awesomeness that’s kinda happening here. 🙂
Anyway. Keep up the good work – Love the comic – And best wishes to you. 🙂
-Johan, The hairy Finn.