True Detective
oh, Greg, you master of subtlety.
I’m taking the next month off of updates to prep for the con next month, but I’ll be posting previews of the prints I’ll be offering, so stay tuned!
Gregor Comics
With Great Power Comes Who Gives A Shit
I want you to know it’s really nice when you post a page like this one without any recycled artwork on it.
These last couple of pages have been approached with a new attitude and it really comes through. Keep it up, Tyler.
Is it just me, or is Greg not judging Katie?
The change in art is coming out very well! While I dont have a nose….lol Gregor is going so out of his way to not judge, but…..
wait… why… when did she switch her shirt back to right side out? It was inside out before and now it’s the right way but still a lighter color to show it’s inside out?
Honestly I didn’t think it translated well after I resized the page for publication so I dropped it after that first page.
got’cha! Kinda wish you’d stuck with it, would’ve stood out pretty well here and the lighter color with the darker edges helped show it was inside out. ‘Course it’s your comic and you can do what you like X)
but I wanna ask one more thing, if you dropped the idea, then why didn’t your colorist go back to the first color green? ’cause it kinda makes it look like she either forgot or that Katie switched out for a lighter green shirt. And while it would’ve been hilarious if she took one of Chloe’s shirts… I don’t think it could’ve fit her XD
You pay way more attention than I do.
weather was not very subtle but I still happen toprove himselfmodern and on one of eighties television superheroes, not to mention a fewrecently created characters you seem to miss the most obvious of clues.
as for the art, you have shown a lot of improvement which is something I like to see in my white comics.it’s always nice to see that’s the part that I am admiring is improving over time. Feel free to take as much time as you need to prepare for the con.I’m pretty sure me and every other fan of this site will wait until you are ready to continue the story.
Wait, what does Greg smell on Katie? =P
He smells eau-de-Chloe
There’s a visual clue in Greg’s right hand.
Oooo very clever, didn’t understand what you meant at first 😛
Errrgh…. must fight… AGH! I can’t!
StrenUous! It’s strenuous!
*sigh* Hi. I’m Brad, and I’m… a Grammar Nazi.
*support group in a deadpan*: “Hiii Braaad.”
Manga Studio doesn’t have spell check and I was in a hurry.
hiiii Braaad. Welcome to the group. You are doing very well with your sessions and medications now. So much that you didn’t spot the “Ver Keen” instead of “Very Keen”. Now group if you can talk amongst yourself I need to go and take my medication as well. Keep on the path Brad, keep on the path! 🙂
That is a spelling error, not a grammatical one
This just keeps getting better. Gregor isn’t really judging her, just showing her that he isn’t as fooled as she might think. Nice.
Oh, and to make Brad feel better (or worse) there’s one other typo that caught my attention (but I missed “strenous”, think my mind autocorrected it heh) – he has a “ver keen” sense of smell? Is that some sort of insect species? 😀
(c’mon … Thri Kreen … any old school AD&D players here?)
Odd, didn’t see any other posts until I hit reply. Wasn’t trying to steal your thunder.
And I believe they only now make Christmas appearances….We Thri Keen of orient are…
Yeah, remember them, also can’t understand why they say a human can’t use one of their daggers, it’s as though no one has even tried
Yeah I thought the same. unless its like a Lawbringer and the daggers are only configured for Thri Keen DNA or some such. TSR were a bit weird with a lot of rules back then though.
The trick is to not try and hold/wield them as though they were made for 5 digit hands, they are more for ‘punching’ strikes rather than the typical ‘slashing/stabbing’
Now I wonder where his smeller is!
Well, if he’s reptilian in nature, he could have sensory pits in the roof of his mouth … dunno, we haven’t had a lot of info on Gregor’s background other than he’s from another planet.
Smells like Teen Spirit
Oooh kill ’em
Kill whom? o_O
Oh, and Tyler – panels 1, 3 & 4 … those expressions on Katie’s face? Your work is surpassing some serious milestones, bud. Take away the speech bubbles and it still says volumes. Kudos.
Funny!
Love the new look; Katie actually looks attractive now…
Did her webtattoo slide down her arm? Isn’t it supposed to be centered on her elbow? o_O
Nope. Forearm. Always.
I thought the same thing but before I posted I went back and checked one of the oldest strips (like second or third one) and the tattoo is in the same place. I think both you and I were confusing it with the way a web is typically placed on the arm (usually on the elbow) but Katie is anything BUT typical, heh.
Not sure if we would want her to be ‘typical’ 😀
Next up… Batting for the other team … It’s Katie!
If Katie is a closet Lesbian, that’s cool. She’s got herself a real cutie for a lover. If she’s Bi, then she’s doubling her chances for a date on Saturday night.
New reader. Just read through everything over a couple hours and the only thing I’m really curious about is why you decided to start in the middle instead of at the beginning? Was it so you could do flash-backs? Will there ever be a story-line explaining more about Gregor and how he met Katie?
Welcome! I started in the middle because it was more interesting. I will get to where he’s from and his relationship with Katie very soon!
Looking forward to it. Thanks for the response!
Funny how the kitten’s playing in gregor’s hand while they’re talking about Katie accidentally cheating on Sean XD